First Comic / Adore The Doll 2(?) Preview

Hello. Let me just say that this comic was a difficult thing to do because I basically had to teach myself how to make comic, which meant learning how to format and size things correctly, as well as creating images while thinking about stuff like head room and lettering. I think it turned out pretty well, but also, I have absolutely no idea what to do with this comic now that it's done.

Now, my attention will likely go back to Learning To Love A Pokemon, however, I have been writing in my spare time a potential sequel to Adore The Doll which I will share here right now. I'm thinking of calling it: Adore The Doll 2: She Bangs The Moon, or just Adore The Doll 2. Here is what I have so far:

A: Hey ya! It's been a while since your bitch girlfriend killed me. I assume you're miserable with her.

C: Go away.

A: You're a little too old for teenage angst.

C: You don't know anything, demon.

A: No one tries to commit suicide if they're happy. Tell Mommy Adore what the problem is.

C: It's YOU! It's always been YOU! Is that what you want to hear?

A: We both know that's a lie. So, are you going to jump or not?

C: Would that make you happy, demon?

A: Nope.

C: You're just pretending to care, like always.

A: You misunderstand. If you jump, you'll just fall forever until you wake up. Basic psychology, really. You feel trapped and powerless. Suicide makes you feel powerful, falling forever represents how trapped you feel.

C: If this is a nightmare, you caused it, demon.

A: I'm not the one making you feel trapped, bitch.

C: Why are you calling me a b-word if you care about me?

A: You misunderstand. I don't hate you, but it's obvious that you're Miss Solar's bitch. I don't blame you, because let's be honest, she's as hot as the sun.

C: She loves me, and I love her, but I can't give her what she deserves because of you.

A: She deserves nothing, and there is a part of you that knows that. It's the part of you that opened your legs and mouth for me.

C: I can never give her my virginity because of you! You took that away from me.

A: I don't like that language. I didn't take anything. You gave your virginity to me, you bitch.

C: You deceived me.

A: You have to stop blaming me and start accepting responsibility. You won't open your legs for Miss Solar, but you opened your legs for me. What part of you made you do that?

C: I don't need to explain myself to you.

A: This is a dream. I am you.

C: You're deceiving me again, demon.

A: Why isn't Miss Solar in your dream? Why am I here?

C: ...

A: You don't know.

C: You left me after you penetrated me. I'm afraid that she'll leave me if we sleep together. You did that to me.

A: I think I understand what's really going on. She doesn't care that you aren't a virgin anymore, but you have PTSD and don't want to admit it.

C: I do not have post-traumatic stress disorder.

A: You're afraid that when she touches you like I did you'll think of me. That's why you need to see me in your dreams and not her. You know that you need to confront your feelings about me before you can fuck her. You know that she doesn't care about your virginity, but that's all that you can think about.

C: That's... Not it.

A: What is it, bitch?

C: I wish she cared.

A: She cared enough to kill me.

C: I mean, I wish she cared that I can't ever have my first time with her. I wish she was upset about it.

A: Do you want to hurt her?

C: No, but, what I did was bad. Why isn't she just as upset as I am?

A: She loves her bitch.

C: You just don't understand.

A: You're right, I don't understand. But if it makes you feel any better, I slept with- SHIT!

(Adore disappears.)

C: Finally, that annoying demon left me alone.

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(Adore wakes up in a cage in a dark basement. Miss Solar is staring at her. Adore frowns, then she crosses her arms and pouts.)

A: You're delusional if you think that she doesn't know that we fucked.

S: I'm sure that she knows about what happened between us at your house. However, she cannot know what became of you afterwards.

A: You mean that she cannot know what you've done to me because you think that she would never love you if she knew.

S: I thought that you were smarter. Are you capable of solving the puzzle?

A: Hmm. I think that you do love her in your own way, but you also want something from her. You love her innocence and you resent that I took that away from her.

S: You're so vain.

A: I'm important enough that you think I need to be locked up in a cage for your protection.

S: Yes. For your protection.

A: Don't make me angry, bitch.

S: I killed you, you didn't kill me.

A: Okay, you love her, and your love is honest and true, but you want something that she can't or won't give to you. If it's not her virginity if has to be a baby. Am I right?

S: You aren't wrong.

A: Just put a baby inside of her belly. Not everything needs to be an evil plan. Why do you need me?

S: I can't kill you.

A: Awww. That's adorable. You really love me.

S: No. I mean, I can't kill you. Until I can permanently stop you it's better than I keep you locked up.

A: What does that have to do with Colorless having a baby?

S: She cries when I touch her.

A: So? That just makes it more fun.

S: You're evil.

A: So are you. 

S: I'm not as evil as you.

A: Haha! Being more subtle with your manipulation than me doesn't make you less evil, bitch.

S: I can't kill you, but I can hurt you really bad.

A: It's so convenient that my weakness is fire and that's the only thing you can do. Tell me your weakness so that things can be fair.

S: My strength is the sun, my weakness is the moon.

A: A little moonlight will kill you. Good to know.

S: Not moonlight, the actual moon.

A: A little moon rock will kill you.

S: The entire unbroken moon is what is needed to kill me. That is not a weapon that you are capable of wielding.

A: We'll see about that.

S: That sounds like a threat.

A: It is a threat. (Changes into Colorless) I'm a bad girl and I need to be punished. Won't you please spank my plump naughty girl bottom?

S: I thought shapeshifters were supposed to be good at acting.

A: We're good at lying.

S: Acting is lying. I'd love to stay and talk with you, but I need to leave. Colorless will be waking up soon and I like being the first thing she sees when she wakes up. You can call me a bitch once more before I leave.

A: You're a total bitch.

S: Yes, and you're stuck in a cage.

(Miss Solar leaves)

A: Well, that was the highlight of my day. I guess I'll take a nap. It's not like there's anything else to do aside from touching myself.

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Adore awakes in a dream realm. Moon stares at her as she opens her eyes.

A: Who the fuck are you and what are you doing in my dreams?

M: Moon.

A: That answers none of my questions! Start talking, bitch, or I'll get mad.

M: Moon want Sun.

A: I don't want to deal with a retarded bitch. Even I have some standards.

M: Help Moon.

A: Look at me. I've been stuck in a cage for a while, and I haven't eaten a single soul since I was put into that cage, so I'm really fucking hangry. I don't want to play these stupid games with a stupid bitch.

M: Kill Sun. Help Moon.

A: I can't kill that bitch. I've tried.

M: Share Moon. Kill Sun.

A: Share? No, I don't share anything, except dildos.

M: No share, no Moon.

A: Kill her yourself if you can.

M: You kill Sun.

A: Why won't you kill her?

M: Blood.

A: You don't like blood. That's the reason.

M: Blood feel bad.

A: Are you seriously allergic to blood?

M: No. Feel bad.

A: You're a fucking child. How old are you?

M: Thousand.

A: Wonderful. Talk to me again when you don't act, think, and talk like you're eight.

M: Want help.

A: Do you expect me to help you when I'm starving? Talk to me when you've brought me some food.

M: What?

A: I need souls. I prefer the tasty souls of sweet girls, but I can eat boys if I get the munchies.

M: No sacrifice innocent girls.

A: I only do nice things for free for girls that I'm fucking. Either you open your legs and let me fuck you, bring me tasty souls to eat, or give me the Moon. Otherwise, we cannot work together. Now, what will it be?

M: No feed souls.

A: Oh, I see. You want me to do things for you and you won't do anything for me. At least show me your boobs.

M: Boobs?

A: I'm a thirsty bitch who loves boobies.

M: Baby hungry.

(Moon removes clothes revealing her boobs. Adore stares at her boobs and smiles.)

A: Nice boobs, bitch!

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Anyways, I hope you guys enjoy this comic. It's different than what I usually do, while also being very typical of what I make due to my usual style. I wanted to make something more wholesome and generic than what I usually make, which is an odd statement to make since the beginning of this comic is a bit unusual. I also originally wanted to make the two characters just 'friends' until I thought about it a bit and realized that if this were uploaded to a website, like MyHentaiComics, it would get more traffic with them being siblings instead.

Once again, I hope you guys enjoy this comic. I worked really hard on it and now, I'm going to sleep. Goodnight.